sentence work

 Hello amazing readers,

We are learning to fix surface features. If you don't know what surface features are, they are little bites in your writing like punctuation,spelling and repeated words. You can also go to the room nine site.We use surface features because it make our easier to read. here is a example: thissentsaChulymakessen Zbuttisrellyhrd to reed this sentence doesn't have surface features. Here is my veson: This sentence makes sense but it is really hard to read.

On our room 9 site our teacher puts link to the surface feature that we needed to fix. we made are own copy we had to read it three times. The first time we had to read we had to find the end of the sentence. The second time we had to find the most used word and change it and it was he. the third time we had to read it we had to make sure everything was fixed.

Here is my work.

He kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder he tried not to suffocate as he laid under the bed he was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house. Mums had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us maybe he was one of them looking for revenge but why would he come. mum would just move and how did he find us we live on the other side of the planet from where all of mums boyfriends were so how could he find us he might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one of the devises ‘Hello where are you I know your here you're going to tell me where you're mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies so which will it be death or freedom you have 10 seconds chose wisely’.

The boy kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder. The boy tried not to suffocate as the boy laid under the bed . He was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house.

 Mum has had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us.

 Maybe he was one of them looking for revenge, but why would he come? Mum would just move, how did he find us? We live on the other side of the planet from where all of mum's boyfriends were so how could The man find us. The man might have put a tracker on mum when the man last saw her or on one of the device. 

¨Hello where are you?¨ I know you're here, you're going to tell me where your mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies. so which will it be? death or freedom you have ten seconds choose wisely.¨

Thank you for reading hope you have a good day.

Word of the week

 Hello readers,

This word of the week I got to pick and I pick luxurious. Luxurious is when something is beautiful or you like something like a new modern .

Here is my work.

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Thank you  for reading  hope you have a good rest of your day.

The birthday surprise

 Hello reader,

This word of the week is going to be about a sneak peek of my writing,Well this writing is about some one having a birthday 

Here is my work and the picture

I woke up and found it to be 10:30...ahhhhhh, Iḿ late!  The party started at 10:00 what am I going to do? I got my waterfall of coffee to make me COME ALIVE. I got in my Porsche nine eleven. I was also going to pick someone up, Tony Stark because his Lamborghini Diablo was in the shop for a fender bender.

So he could come to the party but I can't 10:58  the party finishes at 1:35 so I did A humongous drift around the corner to get tony stark had to walk the party. He was never invited but you always tries to get in.

Thank you for reading my sneak peek hope you have a good day