I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Isaac. I love the way you have included a picture of a real cartouche for us to compare. Great artwork on your Cartouche too! Have a think, and re-read to see if you could add more commas, or full stops to help the reader. Check 'S' picture - I think it is 'folder cloth'. Well done.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora Isaac. I love the way you have included a picture of a real cartouche for us to compare. Great artwork on your Cartouche too! Have a think, and re-read to see if you could add more commas, or full stops to help the reader. Check 'S' picture - I think it is 'folder cloth'. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Isaac.I really like the birds you have drawn.Did you find writing your name very hard?
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