I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Isaac.I found it very hard to read the start of your story.The top bit is missing.I see you went to McDonalds.I REALLY like the fillet of fish burger.I get that in a combo with chips and a banana milkshake.Does your aunty live in Christchurch?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hello Isaac.I found it very hard to read the start of your story.The top bit is missing.I see you went to McDonalds.I REALLY like the fillet of fish burger.I get that in a combo with chips and a banana milkshake.Does your aunty live in Christchurch?
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