I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I'm Natasha and I'm going to be commenting on some of your Summer Learning Journey blog posts throughout the holidays. So far it looks like you're doing an awesome job!
I really like how well you've retold your story and explained everything, giving super specific information about when it happened and what you and your family's reaction was. You're definitely very brave, it sounds like it was a pretty scary experience!
In your post you mentioned that you've actually split your head open on more than one occasion - how many times have you done it? How did you do it the first time?
Remember to give credit for any photos you use in your posts which you don't own - you can do this by putting a link to the source where you got it from or mentioning the site, nice and simple. This is just to make sure no one thinks you're plagiarising (stealing) any photos.
Once again, great job Isaac, I look forward to reading more of your work over the next few weeks. I hope you're having a nice relaxing time away from school. Enjoy the rest of your day :)
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hey Isaac
ReplyDeleteI'm Natasha and I'm going to be commenting on some of your Summer Learning Journey blog posts throughout the holidays. So far it looks like you're doing an awesome job!
I really like how well you've retold your story and explained everything, giving super specific information about when it happened and what you and your family's reaction was. You're definitely very brave, it sounds like it was a pretty scary experience!
In your post you mentioned that you've actually split your head open on more than one occasion - how many times have you done it? How did you do it the first time?
Remember to give credit for any photos you use in your posts which you don't own - you can do this by putting a link to the source where you got it from or mentioning the site, nice and simple. This is just to make sure no one thinks you're plagiarising (stealing) any photos.
Once again, great job Isaac, I look forward to reading more of your work over the next few weeks. I hope you're having a nice relaxing time away from school. Enjoy the rest of your day :)
- Natasha