SLJ art time

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This blog post is about art The hole class had to do a picture online 

here is my work  

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topic

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For topic I have been work on a slide about what you think about these word: Societies,Participate,Family,Celebration,Christmas,Culture and History here is my work

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mosaic art

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This blog post is about mosaic art. if you don't know what mosaic art is it is a picture fill of shapes like broken glass here I will show you my one hope you like it.

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sentence work

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We are learning to fix surface features. If you don't know what surface features are, they are little bites in your writing like punctuation,spelling and repeated words. You can also go to the room nine site.We use surface features because it make our easier to read. here is a example: thissentsaChulymakessen Zbuttisrellyhrd to reed this sentence doesn't have surface features. Here is my veson: This sentence makes sense but it is really hard to read.

On our room 9 site our teacher puts link to the surface feature that we needed to fix. we made are own copy we had to read it three times. The first time we had to read we had to find the end of the sentence. The second time we had to find the most used word and change it and it was he. the third time we had to read it we had to make sure everything was fixed.

Here is my work.

He kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder he tried not to suffocate as he laid under the bed he was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house. Mums had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us maybe he was one of them looking for revenge but why would he come. mum would just move and how did he find us we live on the other side of the planet from where all of mums boyfriends were so how could he find us he might have put a tracker on mum when he last saw her or on one of the devises ‘Hello where are you I know your here you're going to tell me where you're mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies so which will it be death or freedom you have 10 seconds chose wisely’.

The boy kept absolutely still as the footsteps got louder. The boy tried not to suffocate as the boy laid under the bed . He was wondering what had happened to his brother and his family. The man with the knife in his hand stormed around the house.

 Mum has had boyfriends before but we had not thought that they would ever find us.

 Maybe he was one of them looking for revenge, but why would he come? Mum would just move, how did he find us? We live on the other side of the planet from where all of mum's boyfriends were so how could The man find us. The man might have put a tracker on mum when the man last saw her or on one of the device. 

¨Hello where are you?¨ I know you're here, you're going to tell me where your mother is or you shall join your father... in the skies. so which will it be? death or freedom you have ten seconds choose wisely.¨

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Word of the week

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This word of the week I got to pick and I pick luxurious. Luxurious is when something is beautiful or you like something like a new modern .

Here is my work.

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The birthday surprise

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This word of the week is going to be about a sneak peek of my writing,Well this writing is about some one having a birthday 

Here is my work and the picture

I woke up and found it to be 10:30...ahhhhhh, Iḿ late!  The party started at 10:00 what am I going to do? I got my waterfall of coffee to make me COME ALIVE. I got in my Porsche nine eleven. I was also going to pick someone up, Tony Stark because his Lamborghini Diablo was in the shop for a fender bender.

So he could come to the party but I can't 10:58  the party finishes at 1:35 so I did A humongous drift around the corner to get tony stark had to walk the party. He was never invited but you always tries to get in.

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The radiation man

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 I am going to make a series every week I'm going to post some writing and it is add-ons to my stories and you amazing readers can come check them out.

So what I am doing to day I am doing a writing Post about radiation man I will try and get the series to be add-ons to this ok. Well radiation man was about a men which went and in to a mine he was looking for super stones. super stones give you power like radiation-proof and to super strong. that is all the spoilers on going to give you until you read the story. I also forgot to say my changes how are changed it was by adding to my story and puting language features if you don't the language features I go check out one of my other blogs it tells you all about them.

Here is my work.

“Get up, Grab your radiation suits!!!” the boss yelled.

 “Grab your radiation gear too,” I said lightly. 

“NOW”. the boss yelled. The boss all most self-destructed

“Ok sir”. I said loudly like a horse.

“I did not expect that to happen this morning” I said

“Will get to it” the boss yelled like a angry donkey

“Why did I sign up for this job?” I quietly said like the wind blowing past.

I’m at the mine at one am with my working buddies and my boss. There is a thunderstorm Bang pop went the lightning, Like keys getting dropped on the ground.

I was  happy because I did not have to go home, But everyone else had to because I lived far away and they didn't.

I got woken up in the middle of the night and I saw brown eyes. I saw a red and black costume and blue shoes. I thought I knew someone at school like that. “wait my friend got dressed like that.” but he did look like an Turkey. “But there is a serial killer who dressed like that too” I quietly said in my mind. What happens if my friend is a serial killer and he has tried to kill me this whole time.

I found out what he was doing he painted my pickaxe with radiation painted I was dying but at the last second my boss came in and help me he got most of the radiation paint off so I grabbed a stone and scraped it off  I Survivor that time but what is he gonna do next time the boss was not mad at me for once he listened to a story. He was nice and did not think everything was a lie. So I went on a hunt to find the super stones I would have super powers like superman “or if you know him as man of steel” the boss said. 

Goodbye boss and friends It is time to go and save the world and you’s

Meanwhile Just go already I can not stand with too much talking. Of death just go, two days later… I need to find the  last three super stones I am so heavy I could get Crushed.I heard something is it another person looking for the stones nop i’m getting out of here it’s the serial killer. I found a way out, and I found a phone too. I rang the cops. get down on the ground will shoot you and every one was safe and I had all the super stones.

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word of the week

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This word of the week is creative. creative is when you build some thing or make some thing. That is what creative is.

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Narrative writing

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So for writing I was writing a narrative plan for my story and that is what I'm going to show your today.

A narrative plan is something that you're getting ready for a story so it is planning what you are doing for your story.

Here is my work

So this is the difference language features we've been learning that I used.

1. Onomatopoeia  - ‘Bang’

2. Metaphor - “You are the sun!’

3. Personification “The clouds danced across the sky.”

4. Hyperboles - “I was so embarrassed I would have stuck my head in the toilet to hide.”

5. Alliteration - “It was time for super Sunday sports.”

6. Dialogue - “Don’t move,” Ellenessa whispered.

This is my narrative plan.

All of the different colours are for the language features that I can use their. So what I did to make this I made up a story plan then when I finished I made a story but I have not finished my story.

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