Super fun friday sport is over

Hello reader in need of a blog post,

we have been using our language features to write are recounts. we have learnt lots of language features and now we just have to get used to using them. this are the features we have been learning about. 

1. Onomatopoeia - ‘Bang’
2. Metaphor - “You are the sun!’
3. Personification “The clouds danced across the sky.”
4. Hyperboles - “I was so embarrassed I would have stuck my head in the toilet to hide.”
5. Alliteration - “It was time for super Sunday sports.”
6. Dialogue - “Don’t move,” Ellenessa whisperer

We planned are writing by writing down When? Were? Whay? How? Why? and What?

We highlighted the bullet point which we could put language features:

• Line up on the court 

• Fun day sport- super fun friday sport

• Then we go across the road- every one wipering

• We do warm ups - I am so sick of warm ups i'm going to die

• Then we play a game 

• Then at halftime we talk what places we are going to be

• Then we continue the game then

•  Then at time up we go back to the school

• We bang are shoes on the grass

• Then we go to the gym to get the certificates

How ?

• We go to kyle bark - mumbling

• We find are field and do warm ups

• We bang are shoes and then we wait in the gym 

• When ?

• When the bell ring we go line up on the court

• We do it on fridays

• We do it at 1:20

Who?

• Me , zahina , Tory , leo , ahyan , nijesh

• Mr T came with us

• We had two coaches zip and Arnie

Where?

• Kyle park

• In hornby

• Close to the mall

• Because miss scott got everything read for as      

Why?

• Because we are a year six

• Because the principal said so

Then we wrote our story using our language features. But I did not finished my story here is the start.

Fun day super sports is over. But I'm going to tell you all about it. one Friday afternoon at 1:20 we went over to Kyle park as fast as sonic.We played against our cluster.before we did the game I was set on fire from my warm ups. I had to run and kick passes.At the end we played a game of ball rush.we started to play the game and I self-destructed but I didn’t.

What?

Thank you for reading.