I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
A nice recount Isaac. Well done. You have interesting ideas and detail and it flows well. I like your introduction and personal statement at the end. Ka pai!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
A nice recount Isaac. Well done. You have interesting ideas and detail and it flows well. I like your introduction and personal statement at the end. Ka pai!
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