I ,made a book on book creator the wise wizard.
I made this on book creator it has an orientation and a problem and solution.
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Good effort with your book Isaac. Just near the end you seemed to get a bit tied up with too much talking. Here you could just tell the story as the problem comes to a climax and then the solution, maybe without so much "talking" from the characters. A nice book!
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